Poet Joyce Clement writes haiku, a traditional Japanese form. While it's often thought of as having three lines with 5-7-5 syllables, Joyce says that the key elements of any haiku are a fragment and a phrase spoken in a single breath. In this sequence of haiku, Joyce juxtaposes punctuation marks with images of birds, drawing on their similar appearances, as well as meaning.
Joyce Clement: Birds Punctuate the Days
Written by Mark Bramhill
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It's National Poetry Month in the US, and we're celebrating by sharing some bird-related work from contemporary poets. Joyce Clement writes haiku, a traditional Japanese form. Often thought of as having three lines with 5-7-5 syllables, many English haikus don't follow this pattern strictly. There are many common traits to haiku — they're often about nature, about a moment in time, reference a season — but all good rules are made to be broken. The essential part to Joyce:
Joyce Clement: It is a one breath poem that usually consists of two parts: a fragment and a phrase. And those two parts are juxtaposed next to each other and form a type of relationship.
Mark Bramhill: In this sequence of haiku, Joyce juxtaposes punctuation marks with images of birds, drawing on their similar appearances, as well as meaning and function. Listen for how these work together:
Birds Punctuate the Days
the nuthatch inserts itself
between feeder and pole
two mallards drifting
one dunks for a snail
a mourning dove
a red-eyed vireo catches
the crane fly midair
a down feather
bobs between waves
wren on the railing
mergansers paddle toward
morning trout swirl
at dusk a wild goose
the length of silence
after a loon’s call
one blue egg all summer long
Mark Bramhill: In each haiku in the sequence, you can see the different kinds of relationships between bird and punctuation. Joyce was initially inspired by the down feather bobbing in the water — its shape like a comma, moving in arcs, with a repetitive, list-like quality to its motion. Or in the haiku about the loon…
Joyce Clement: It's all about asking questions. you've got a question mark and then that silence that it talks about creates a question, will there be a response? It fosters a sense of loneliness. Which, you know, the loon’s call often evokes, right?
Mark Bramhill: Or for the mergansers, it was inspired by her memories seeing them in the summer in the Adirondacks.
Joyce Clement: And you know, there was a merganser paddling along followed by, I don't know, you know, it seems like a hundred chicks, but you know, 10 chicks, all just in a row, as they do. It's quite amusing. But that's what made me think of the colon mark, because the colon indicates what to follow is going to be a list, right? So there was female merganser, followed by the list! Which was all these other, you know, little, uh, mergansers following along. So it had to be mergansers!
Mark Bramhill: You can keep celebrating Poetry Month with more wonderful writing at our website, BirdNote.org. I'm Mark Bramhill.
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Bird sounds provided by The Macaulay Library of Natural Sounds at the Cornell Lab of Ornithology, Ithaca, New York. White-breasted Nuthatch ML 176168 recorded by G. Keller, Mourning Dove ML 125320641 recorded by J. McGowan, and Common Loon ML 381016291 recorded by D. MacNeal.
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